Feminine Wiles

[lumy12]

Title: Feminine Wiles
Fandom: Star Wars
Characters: Anakin/Padmé
Prompt: fanfic50 #36 Dress
Word Count: 144
Rating: PG-13
Author's Notes: Written for another community but I decided it fit well here too ^_^

The flickering firelight generated a golden halo around her head. Highlighted her lips. Gave her skin a soft shimmer. That skin... there was so much of it uncovered! How he longed to caress it and kiss it and claim it for his own.

Her bosom heaved as she spoke. His eyes dipped down into the shadow, but alas, the nether regions were, in fact, covered. Every time he checked. Which was approximately every two seconds.

He couldn't process what she was saying. Something about how they couldn't do this, they'd be living a lie, it would lead to disaster, blah blah. Maybe this time... no, still covered. Gah! Stop it, she's talking, you have to be coherent!

Padmé seemed to enjoy torturing him so. What was she thinking, wearing such a sexy gown and then denying him? The woman definitely had an evil streak.

Comments

[amidala-thrace.livejournal.com]

Yay, you wrote something!! This makes me way more unnaturally happy than it should, lol.

Interesting imagining of Anakin's thoughts during the fireplace scene! I always thought his not looking her in the eye while she was talking was totally because he was trying to figure out the quickest way to get that corset off. XD This is very well-written, the short sentences really fit the tone of the piece.

[luminations.livejournal.com]

Thaaaaaaaaanks! I've been writing loads lately, actually, compared to my usual quantity. Just nowhere near as much as you do! I'm glad to hear you say it's well-written - I wrote it quite quickly but sometimes things come out better that way. And you, of course, have the perfect icon!

[emavalexis.livejournal.com]

*squee*

I agree about it being well-written. Very sweet and heartfelt, and it nicely conveys his raging teenage hormones.

Especially this:

Every time he checked. Which was approximately every two seconds.

Love it.

[luminations.livejournal.com]

Awww, thanks! *snicker* Yeah, I love horny!teen!Ani.

[lazypadawan.livejournal.com]

I knew Anakin wasn't paying too much attention to what she was saying ;).

[luminations.livejournal.com]

Hehehe, how COULD he? That dress was evil! The poor guy didn't stand a chance!

[morgonskywalker.livejournal.com]

I liked this! Anakin actually acting his age and can't keep his eyes off Padme's chest even in a serious conversation. And she did dress revealingly, especially on Naboo, but she seemed oblivious to the temptations she was presenting to Anakin.

[luminations.livejournal.com]

Thanks! ^_^ Yeah, really he WAS a teenage boy, after all. I've always thought it was a bit evil of her to wear that dress!