Free Time

Apr. 12th, 2008 05:45 pm
[personal profile] lumy12
This just in: Hell has frozen over!

Title: Free Time
Fandom: Star Wars
Characters: Anakin/Obi-Wan
Prompt: [livejournal.com profile] fanfic50 #17 - Dance
Word Count: 835
Rating: R
Summary: Anakin meets up with Obi-Wan in the briefing room at the Jedi Temple.
Author's Notes: This fic ONLY exists because [livejournal.com profile] gizzi1213 is the Queen of Guilt Trips >.>
Happy birthday, Deborah! ♥

"You're late," Obi-Wan grumbled as his former apprentice entered the briefing room.

"Sorry, Master," Anakin replied flippantly, hurrying over to assist Obi-Wan with the holoprojector. "I'm not that late, though. No one else is even supposed to be here for a while yet."

"You were visiting the Chancellor again, weren't you." Obi-Wan sounded nonchalant as he fiddled with the projector, averting his gaze from Anakin's.

The young Jedi studied his Master carefully. Obi-Wan was so skilled at shielding his emotions in the Force that it was difficult to read him sometimes. Did he detect a hint of jealousy in Obi-Wan's voice, or was he imagining it? "I was," he answered, equally nonchalant. "I know you don't like it, but I do enjoy spending time with him."

"You're no longer my Padawan. Your free time is your own; I can't keep you from doing as you please," Obi-Wan said coolly.

"Are you jealous?" Anakin asked playfully.

"Of course not," snapped Obi-Wan.

Lies! thought Anakin smugly. "Don't worry, I promise I won't start liking his company more than yours."

"I'm not worried," Obi-Wan said with exasperation. "Though I do wish you'd pay more attention to the chrono when we have an appointment. You know I can never seem to get this machine working properly."

Anakin smirked. "Here, allow me," he said, brushing his flesh hand accidentally-on-purpose over Obi-Wan's. Obi-Wan jerked his hand back as if scalded, but not before a delicious tingle shot through Anakin's body.

"So what did you and the Chancellor discuss today?" Obi-Wan inquired. He ran the "scalded" hand through his hair -- a bit nervously, Anakin thought. His calm façade was fading.

"Oh, I might have been giving him a little bit more detail from our adventures on Cato Neimoidia," Anakin replied with a grin.

Obi-Wan sighed. "That was a long time ago. Must you keep telling people about it?"

"Yes. Everyone needs to know you're not as perfect as you pretend to be, Master." Anakin proceeded to program the holoprojector for their presentation. The simple task did not even require half his attention, so he was able to glance up at Obi-Wan frequently while he worked.

His Master was muttering some sort of protest, but Anakin wasn't paying attention to his words. He was thinking about how much it amused him to make Obi-Wan uncomfortable and flustered. He wasn't sure why this should be so, as he cared about his Master a great deal and did truly desire to make him happy.

He could feel the Force becoming more sexually charged around them.

Anakin didn't bother to shield the lust swelling inside him. He stopped working and instead just stared at Obi-Wan, drinking in the sight of him, willing him to return his gaze. Force, he's gorgeous. And he doesn't even know it.

Obi-Wan finally looked up. "Anakin..." he began warningly.

Anakin did not heed the warning. He leaned forward swiftly and covered Obi-Wan's soft lips with his own. He heard a muffled protest, but it melted into a moan as he deepened the kiss, nearly upsetting the holoprojector in the process.

Obi-Wan pulled away. "Anakin, we can't do this here," he said, panting slightly.

"You're right. We can't. We should move over here," Anakin replied with a grin, taking a few steps to his right. With the equipment no longer between them, he pulled Obi-Wan close and resumed kissing him. His Master responded eagerly, pressing his body against Anakin's, his hands wandering over his shoulders, his back, his ass... every so often pulling back just slightly with a weak protest. That was the game: Obi-Wan protested, Anakin persisted. Eventually one gave in to the other.

Anakin knew they didn't have much time before the other Jedi were due to arrive. While he and Obi-Wan would be able to sense anyone approaching in the adjacent hallway, this few seconds' warning wouldn't give them enough time to fix their robes and release any unspent passion into the Force. They would have to make do with not getting naked.

Anakin deftly unbuckled Obi-Wan's belt and slid his hand beneath his pants. Obi-Wan groaned in anticipation, and his cock stiffened, but his words contradicted his body's reaction. "Anakin, stop it. We're in public!" he growled against his mouth.

"No we're not," Anakin cajoled, his hand edging further down his Master's pants. "There's no one else here."

"Anakin, I mean it!"

"If you really meant it, you'd be all the way across the room lecturing me by now," Anakin teased, capturing Obi-Wan's mouth in another insistent kiss. He maneuvered his underwear out of the way easily beneath his loose drawstring trousers. As his hand grasped his Master's rock-hard cock, he knew he had Obi-Wan this time. He kissed his way across his cheek to his ear, breathing hotly into it as his hand began pumping.

"Besides, you said it yourself, Master..." Anakin whispered, enjoying the quiet moans and the delightful shivering from the body he was pleasuring. "You can't keep me from doing as I please!"

Date: 2008-04-13 02:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gizzi1213.livejournal.com
Checks name on journal...

**JAW DROP**

Checks name on journal again...

shakes head....


YOU WROTE ME ANAKIN/OBI-WAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wait...this IS Wendy's LJ right??? **Checks name yet AGAIN**

YOU WROTE ME ANAKIN/OBI-WAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Who are, and what have you done with Wendy?? (Not that I'm complaining mind you!! It's about time there was some Anakin/Obi-Wan goodness on this journal!!!)

I only had one drink tonight, so I know I'm not hallucinating...you really WROTE ME ANAKIN/OBI-WAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Now I am complete...." dies

(BTW, LOVE IT TOO!!!!)




Date: 2008-04-13 02:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luminations.livejournal.com
It's about time there was some Anakin/Obi-Wan goodness on this journal!!!

Nooooooo my journal is now SOILED!

Hehehe, happy birthday, Queen of Guilt Trips! I wouldn't suffer like this for just anyone, ya know!

Glad you like it!

Date: 2008-04-13 02:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amidala-thrace.livejournal.com
Wendy ... wrote ... Anakin/Obi-Wan ...?

*dies* *revives* *dies again* *revives again* *dies!!!!!!!*

LOL. ;) Guilt trip or not, this was terrific. One would never know that you usually despise this pairing, since you write it like someone who's been doing so for years. Characterizations were spot-on, and I loved the descriptions and dialogue. I demand more! Yes, aye, more!

Or Obidala. Whichever you prefer.

Sooooo ... now you've written this, how about that TM threesome we keep talking about? *shifty look* *sidles away whistling innocently*

Date: 2008-04-13 02:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luminations.livejournal.com
Thank you! Yes, I had to mention first that hell had frozen over. And really I just want Deb to do that Palpakin sequel she keeps teasing us with. It will include Obidala too so you need to pester her for that as well! And I had to include Palpatine just to mess with Deb's head a little. Or something. *snicker*

I'm not completely opposed to that idea, but TM!Ani is, you see. He insists he's straight! LOL

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Date: 2008-04-14 04:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nelliedrum.livejournal.com
Oooh, ObiDala is a tough subject. At least I can stand to read that one.
Especially because in the novel, there is that whole suspicion of the two of them.

Date: 2008-04-13 03:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] temple-mistress.livejournal.com
Totes dropping in on the birthday parade here, but...

KSDJF:KLSJDKFD!! This is awesome, and, um...YOU NEED TO BE DOING THIS MORE OFTEN, PLZ!

I...I think my face hurts from smiling like a damn fool through the whole thing. So in-character, in-voice, a good tease and a yummy bit of hotty mchotness. Mmmm...

Obi-Wan pulled away. "Anakin, we can't do this here," he said, panting slightly.
"You're right. We can't. We should move over here," Anakin replied with a grin


Oh, I...I think I'm in an AO bit of heaven tonight. THANK YOU!!

Plz, can it be Deborah's birthday every day? PLZ???

Date: 2008-04-13 03:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luminations.livejournal.com
Ah yes I've seen you on M's journal too! Hello there!

Thank you so much! I'm glad it's so appealing to you rabid A/O types! Just don't expect any more, I'm a Palpakin gal. Hee!

Date: 2008-04-13 03:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gizzi1213.livejournal.com
It can be my birthday every day...as long as I don't have to AGE a YEAR every DAY!!!!

(And doesn't [livejournal.com profile] luminations write just a WONDERFUL Anakin/Obi-Wan????

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Date: 2008-04-13 06:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sakurafromjapan.livejournal.com
*checks the name again and again and giggles uncontrollably*

You have done it, now, haven't you ! XD

So, you really HAD to bend your principle to write this A/O fic as a birthday gift, yes ? And it was all for your dearest LJ friend Deborah-san( = gizzi1213 ? ) ? Aww ... *hugs you*

What was so great about all this is ... you did it out of kindness and love without being blackmailed ( I think )! *giggles again*

But ... how come you ( an anti-A/O shipper ) get to write such a wonderful A/O fic while I ( a born A/O shipper ) have a hard time writing one ? *pouts*

Sakura :)
PS. Where "gizzi1213" frantically asked you in her comment what you had done with the author( "=you" unless she's right that you're someone else ) really cracked me up ! XD

Date: 2008-04-13 02:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luminations.livejournal.com
Hehe! Deborah-chan made me feel bad because she has written me Ani/Palpy stories (twice!) and I keep bugging her for a sequel to the one. So it wasn't exactly blackmail, just guilt!

Just don't expect me to start reading/writing them now! ^_^

Date: 2008-04-13 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gizzi1213.livejournal.com
Well, now, you have to admit, it's such a SHOCKING event to have [livejournal.com profile] luminations write Anakin/Obi-Wan it DOES beg the question of 1) she's a clone; 2) she's been possessed by alien; or 3) she was totally drunk and wasted when she wrote it!!!

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Date: 2008-04-13 02:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luminations.livejournal.com
Who claims to despise them? I DO despise them! :P
Yeah, consider this a late birthday present for you too ♥ cuz I don't plan on writing them again! But now I can pester Deborah for the sequel to her Ani/Palpy story with a clear conscience. lol
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Date: 2008-04-13 03:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gizzi1213.livejournal.com
I'm still positively GIDDY over getting [livejournal.com profile] luminations to write me an A/O fic!! And she really does need to write more of them, this was EXCELLENT!!!

Date: 2008-04-13 03:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emavalexis.livejournal.com
YAY!

I LOVED this, Wendy! =)

It's true that one would never guess your... disinclination toward Anakin/Obi-Wan from reading this. You did a great job, good character stuff, humor, and teh sexay.

I WANT MORE.

Date: 2008-04-13 03:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gizzi1213.livejournal.com
I WANT MORE.

Don't we all! And, she'll be loathe to admit it, but she's enjoying all this squeeing for joy in her LJ. Anakin/Palpatine NEVER gets that kind of reaction!! LOL

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Date: 2008-04-13 03:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luminations.livejournal.com
Thank you! I wondered what you'd think of it. My poor inner Palpy is emo now :)

Noooooooooo no more!

Date: 2008-04-13 04:10 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] pronker
Anakin getting his way with, well, having his way with Obi-Wan in that setting was particularly cute. I'd never guess the author despises the pairing so ... or perhaps she is turning to the Young Side of the Force ... (see icon)

Date: 2008-04-13 04:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luminations.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it but noooooooooo not turning to the Young Side! Gah! Still a Palpakin shipper at heart! :)

Date: 2008-04-13 08:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] queen-meep.livejournal.com
Not only was it an Anakin/Obi-Wan, but it was one involving SEX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

JAW DROP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH WENDY?!?!

(It was good, too! D: D: D: D: )

Date: 2008-04-13 08:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luminations.livejournal.com
Ha ha, you sound like Deborah!

Thank you, sweetie. I'm waiting for someone to come along and go "Ewww that was horrible, don't ever write any more!" and I'll go "okay!"

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Date: 2008-04-13 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zigsternenstaub.livejournal.com
*straps on ice skates*

Actually, when I first saw Anakin/Obi-Wan on my f-list, I wondered what sort of strange community I had accidentally signed up to. Then I saw your name.

Still, despite the ebil pairing, I quite liked this. The constant mentions of Palpatine probably helped;) And Anakin being evil and teasing Obi-Wan was quite hilarious. A fun little fic!

Date: 2008-04-13 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luminations.livejournal.com
Ack! See, you're supposed to be one of the ones telling me to never ever do this again because GAH THE HORROR!!!111!

Hehe, no really, I'm glad you liked it besides the inherent EVILEness. I had to throw Palpatine in there to keep Deb on her toes. Hee!

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Date: 2008-04-14 04:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nelliedrum.livejournal.com
So I started reading this...not knowing what it was. I thought it was some dramatic ani-obi story.
I was too busy trying to ignore all the technical errors...like how he really WAS LATE, and everyone had already left. Oh, and why was he coming from the Chancellor's when he really was coming from talking with yoda? Whatever....

THEN suddenly, you start getting all freaky on me and I'm like. WHAT THE @*$#!?!?!

I know you have your fantasies... but that's just...strange.

Date: 2008-04-14 02:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luminations.livejournal.com
No, see, it's not supposed to be THAT scene. It's just a similar set-up. I've seen the movies enough times to not mess that up so badly!

And I don't 'ship Ani/Obi, that's why I put the bit about hell freezing over. I wrote it as a favor to a friend. It's probably the most popular pairing in fandom, but I much prefer Ani/Palpy, which probably isn't any less "freaky" to you. Heh.

The slash between the characters' names implies a romantic or sexual relationship, at least in my stuff (and lots of others). I do occasionally write Anakin/Padme, which I know you like. You don't have to read everything!

Date: 2008-04-15 02:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snarryvader81.livejournal.com
It was good . . . but its not Anakin/Palpatine! :( I guess it just doesn't have that . . . umph . . . for some reason. Nevermind, I'm just obsessed with Palpatine.

Please write more!



Anna

Date: 2008-04-15 02:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luminations.livejournal.com
I agree! It's not Ani/Palpy so it's CLEARLY nowhere near as awesome as certain people seem to think! Thanks for reading it anyway. This will hopefully be the last time A/O makes an appearance in this journal!

I have a fluffy Ani/Palpy story in the works. It just... kind of lacks any real plot or twist, unless I make it a 2-parter. But that's all I'll say about that. Hee!

Date: 2008-04-17 02:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iheart-carlisle.livejournal.com
oh wow, one of the best sw slash stories i have ever read!!! thank you so much for sharing it!!!

Date: 2008-04-17 02:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luminations.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you liked it! I NEVER write Ani/Obi. This was a one-time deal... I think. Though enough people are pestering me to write more. Bleh! I much prefer Ani/Palpy :)

Date: 2008-04-17 04:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iheart-carlisle.livejournal.com
haha, yeah i just read your profile. =) but to be honest, I am not too fond of Ani/Obi, too. Dunno why. Just doesn't seem right...
i've recently seen ROTS again and watched the Ani/Paply/Windu scene like a thousand times =) i guess i need to search your journal more closely to satisfy my Ani/Palpy fanfic needs, huh?

best regards
sandra

Date: 2008-04-17 06:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luminations.livejournal.com
That's a great scene!!!

I still haven't organized my fic into a page, but you can click on the fanfiction tag and search through it that way. They're all pretty short :)

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