Your Love Is Better Than Ice Cream

[lumy12]

Title: "Your Love Is Better Than Ice Cream" (yup, I blatantly stole it from Sarah McLachlan!)
Fandom: Star Wars
Characters: Anakin/Obi-Wan
Prompt: caffeinatedkate's request: Anakin/Obi-Wan + summer. I'm also going to apply it to my fanfic50 claim, for #12 - Notice.
Word Count: 359
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Anakin and Obi-Wan celebrate Anakin's sixteenth birthday.
Author's Notes: Hiatus drabble #4.


Anakin Skywalker couldn't have asked for a more perfect day. It was a rare expedition away from the Jedi Temple, one that did not involve a mission: Obi-Wan had taken him to a water park for his sixteenth birthday. Today he was not a Jedi Padawan; he was simply a teenager frolicking in the sun.

They had sampled all the water slides, surfed and splashed about in the artificial ocean, and drifted lazily down the river surrounding the park, their legs hooked over each other's inner tubes so they wouldn't be separated. Now, lounging beneath a striped beach umbrella, Anakin happily lapped at a chocolate ice cream cone. He watched his Master lick his own vanilla cone with deft swirls of his tongue. Chocolate dribbled down Anakin's chin; he barely felt it, so transfixed was he on his Master's mouth.

Obi-Wan noticed. With a wicked glimmer in his eye, he leaned over to offer the service of that exquisite tongue in lieu of a napkin. Anakin dared not move as Obi-Wan traced the path of ice cream up to his lips. Now that he was sixteen, would his Master finally deem him old enough to...

A soft moan escaped him as he thrust his tongue out to meet Obi-Wan's. His senses exploded as he drew his Master's sun-kissed body against his own, ice cream be damned.

"Anakin, what in the blazes is wrong with you?"

The teenager suddenly became aware of the ice cream dripping down his arm. Anakin had gripped the cone hard enough to crack it, and its creamy contents oozed everywhere. He was a sticky mess, with Obi-Wan's tongue nowhere near him. In fact, the look in his Master's eyes was decidedly more bewildered than wicked or lustful. Anakin clumsily dabbed at his arm with a towel and Obi-Wan snickered at him, now looking quite thoroughly amused.

So the day actually could have been more perfect, as illustrated by his little fantasy, but Anakin had no cause to complain. Bringing a smile to Obi-Wan's handsome, overly-serious face was definitely worth a little embarrassment. Besides, the day wasn't over yet, and the night had yet to begin.

Comments

[ansketil-rose.livejournal.com]

NOOO! Only Palpatine can buy Anakin icecream! I liked the "what the blazes" though.

[luminations.livejournal.com]

I can't believe you read this! I warned you! GO BLEACH YOUR BRAIN OUT WITH PALPAKIN RIGHT NOW, YOUNG LADY!

Hehe, glad you found something to like anyway. I agree, only Palpatine should buy the lad treats.

[ansketil-rose.livejournal.com]

And the also chocolate and vanilla was funny. That says so much about the two of them... yes Anakin likes chocolate best! DARK chocolate. lol.

[luminations.livejournal.com]

LOL yep I totes did that on purpose. AND OBI = VANILLA :|

This is the only Obi-Wan icon I have on here, I think. With his twu wuv Qui!

[frostbit-sky.livejournal.com]

LOL, Anakin is a naughty boy.

I'll replace Obi with Padmé. ;)

Very funny fic.

[luminations.livejournal.com]

That works for me too, replacing Obi with Padme! Yes! Bye bye Obes!

Thank you <3

[ansketil-rose.livejournal.com]

Haha! Nobody wants you Obi! Ani only goes for Nabooans!

[lealynnkenobi.livejournal.com]

Well that was certainly a fun read. :)

Chocolate and vanilla.. darkside and lightside.

Lovely thoughts from Anakin... but, hey he couldn't help himself, it's Obi-Wan! :)

[luminations.livejournal.com]

LOL I love how everyone who's commented on this fic is NOT an "Ani/Obi person" - OTP-wise, at least :)

I don't know how Obi-Wan could resist an ice creamy Anakin.

Thanks for reading!

It's a long way down to the place where we started from. <3

[tartanshell.livejournal.com]

Aww, this is absolutely adorable! And hah, I do ship Anakin/Obi-Wan!

I loved the chocolate/vanilla thing, and Anakin's sticky awakening from his fantasy! (...Wow, that sounded wrong.)

So cute! I loved it. ♥

<3

[luminations.livejournal.com]

You broke the pattern! No, wait, not really, because you're an OT girl at heart. :P

LOL maybe it was sticky in more ways than one? :D

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed! ♥

I want to go tubing!

[pronker]

I liked the summer milieu, the daydreaming in the sun and the dribbling. Of ice cream, that is. Cute and very teen-y mood, great!

REAL tubing or just floating around a teeny river? :D

[luminations.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

The prompt "summer" just HAS to be fun and light-hearted, methinks. Though I live on Tatooine where summer = hell.

[sakurafromjapan.livejournal.com]

Mmm...aww...*melts into completely-melted ice-cream*

SO BEAUTIFULLY-WRITTEN, Wendy !! :D

Oh...*sighs dreamly* neh(you know), the title of this one could also be "Anakin: Gay Days". XD

[luminations.livejournal.com]

Gay Days would fit! Hehe, glad you like it, sweetie ~ YOUR request is up next! Hmmm, maybe I'll type it up before I go away next weekend with no internet...or maybe I'll just make you wait for it...

[sakurafromjapan.livejournal.com]

Kyah(Screech) ! You're going to do WHAT ?! ( MAKE ME WAIT ?? ) *feels like fainting* XD

Um...but...if it's going to be kind of high-rated and worth the wait, I'll try to be patient and can even wait till you're back from the Internet-less planet, Wendy. ^_^;

[luminations.livejournal.com]

I might have time to type it up before I go :) It's not that high rated so don't get your hopes up. I tried to keep it drabble-length but I think it might end up being a little on the long side. Will that make up for the lesser rating? Hehehe! ♥

[sakurafromjapan.livejournal.com]

But, still . . . I AM looking forward to it, you know. ;)

Hehehe to you, too ! ♥♥♥

[caffeinatedkate.livejournal.com]

Okay, you cheated slightly by making the slash part a fantasy but I'll let you get away with it because you haven't got a strong stomach for my ship and it's still a nice little fic. And yes, the chocolate and vanilla thing is good actually.

The prompt "summer" just HAS to be fun and light-hearted, methinks.
That's why I picked it, I needed something with a light-hearted tone otherwise I couldn't trust you not to go and kill Obi off. :p

[lumy12.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Yeah, see, you knoooooow how hard it is for me to write them! Doesn't the fantasy still count because it gives you icky pleasant mental images? ^_^

Awww I wouldn't kill off Obi. Palps might, though.

Feel free to write the sequel in which it's NOT just a fantasy...just don't expect me to read it ;)

[caffeinatedkate.livejournal.com]

Sadly, I've got enough unfinished stuff of my own to be getting on with writing.

*Grumbles* You should read something of mine, I read your "Daddy" thing. :p

[lumy12.livejournal.com]

Blackmail! >.>
I do read your stuff! Just not your A/O :)

[gizzi1213.livejournal.com]

Doesn't count!!!!

[gizzi1213.livejournal.com]

Isn't luminations amazing with how she gets everyone to read her stuff, no matter what pairing, yet she won't read something if she doesn't like the pairing??

We're calling you out on that, Wendy!!! You will learn to read Anakin/Obi-Wan. You don't have to learn to LIKE it, just READ it, like I do with the Palpakin stuff!!!

mmmmm ice creammmmm

[flaxenescapee.livejournal.com]

You and Obi-Wan are both teases! Evil, evil, evil!

Woo, my heart is racing a little too fast for the morning subway ride, haha! Moar!

:D

[luminations.livejournal.com]

LOL I'll take that as a compliment! I do so enjoy being EVILE!

Thank you :) Oooo morning subway ride, how lovely! I have to take my car just about everywhere so I'm a bit jealous.

[gizzi1213.livejournal.com]

I do believe that Anakin had a Chocolate ice cream orgasm!!!! I totally agree that Obi-Wan = Vanilla and Vanilla = BORING...unless he's banging Anakin!!!

I'm still speechless that you actually WROTE an Anakin/Obi-Wan Fic. caffeinatedkate must really rate because you won't write it for me!!!!!!

[luminations.livejournal.com]

Yay you read it! I was beginning to SERIOUSLY worry about your fic libido if you couldn't even be arsed to read an A/O fic!!!

In regards to your OTHER comments - no one is forcing you to read Palpakin against your will. You're free to ignore anything you choose, Shnookums. (I might point out that 3 of these requests posted so far have not even called for Palpakin! And the one that kinda did isn't THAT "bad")

You have the shortest memory ever! I wrote you some crappy fic for your birthday last year :P And I had no choice here, this was a Request on the Request Post! I take such things seriously!