Rites of Passage
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lumy12Title: "Rites of Passage"
Fandom: Star Wars
Characters: Anakin & Obi-Wan (implied Anakin/Obi-Wan & Anakin/Palpatine)
Prompt:![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
sakurafromjapan's request, in which she cheated and included a plot summary ;) I'm also going to apply it to my ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
fanfic50 claim, for #21 - Stutter.
Word Count: 948
Rating: PG-13. I think. Possibly a light R.
Summary: Anakin comes back from an encounter with Palpatine and Obi-Wan gets JEALOUS.
Author's Notes: Hiatus drabble #5. And it's way too long to be considered a drabble, whoops! Sorry it's not NC-17. I seem to have a hard time achieving that rating :|
Anakin Skywalker probably should have showered before he left the Chancellor’s apartments, but the idea didn’t even occur to him – so heady was he after all the man had done to his body. It was a small miracle he’d managed to return to the Jedi Temple at all, given the lure of Palpatine’s luxurious bed. Only the knowledge that Obi-Wan would surely kill him if he wasn’t in his own bed by sunrise brought him home.
And Anakin probably should have sensed Obi-Wan’s presence in his dark bedroom, but he was distracted by his erotic memories… memories he wanted to relive on his way to sleep. He quickly shed his tunics, eager to wrap his body in remembrance instead. Suddenly the lights flicked on. Obi-Wan.
Anakin continued to undress himself, trying to look nonchalant (though his heart was racing). “What are you doing in here, Master?” he muttered crankily.
“Where have you been, Padawan?” Obi-Wan demanded. “Do you have any idea what time it is?”
Anakin sat on the bed, clad only in his underwear, and looked at his bedside chrono. “It’s nearly 0200,” he informed the older man coolly.
“Don’t get smart with me, Anakin,” Obi-Wan warned exasperatedly. “Where were you?”
“Out,” Anakin replied, yawning. He didn’t mean to be impertinent. He just really didn’t feel like getting into this now. Also, he sensed that Obi-Wan would be hurt if he knew.
“That answer is not satisfactory, Padawan.”
“I was with the Chancellor, all right?” Anakin spat out, his head bowed but his eyes seeking a reaction.
Something unreadable flickered over his Master’s face upon mention of Palpatine. “And what, pray tell, were you doing with the Chancellor at this time of night?”
“None of your business,” replied Anakin with a snort.
Obi-Wan’s usual Jedi stoicism gave way to a rare display of anger. “I’m your Master – everything you do is my business!”
“I’m not a little boy anymore, Master,” Anakin grumbled, unperturbed. “I’m a man. I can make my own decisions.”
“You are eighteen, which is barely a man by definition, and it’s my job to guide you to make the right decisions.” Obi-Wan sat beside him, some of his anger dissipating. “And I fail to see how…” A pause. “What’s that smell? You smell like…”
Oh Force, he knows. Anakin turned away.
“Like cologne… musk and sweat. Like…”
Like sex. Anakin mentally dared Obi-Wan to finish the thought. Force, his Master was such a prude. So annoying.
Obi-Wan cleared his throat. “What exactly were you two doing?” he repeated quietly.
Anakin was unbearably irritated now. He turned to glare at the irritant. “Well, if you must know, Master, YES, we were fucking! Happy now?” How Obi-Wan flinched at that! “You wanna know all the details? ‘Cause first, he sucked me off. Oh – but before that—“
“Enough!” Obi-Wan bolted off the bed and began pacing the floor, running his hand through his hair and generally looking quite discombobulated. “Anakin, I thought… I thought you were a virgin.”
The smug Padawan snickered. “I was.”
Obi-Wan gasped audibly at that, and the color drained from his face. For a moment, he looked vulnerable. The moment passed, and the calm expression of a nearly-emotionless Jedi returned.
Suddenly, Anakin felt ashamed. He remembered his earlier sense that the truth would hurt his Master – that was something he truly didn’t want to do. His tone softened. “I didn’t do anything wrong, did I? I mean, aside from sneaking out of the Temple, of course.” -But that was a rite of passage for every Padawan, and not something the Masters were overly concerned about. A minor infraction.
Obi-Wan frowned. “I worry that you’re becoming too attached to Palpatine. And remember, he is not a Jedi. He doesn’t understand our ways.”
How typical of Obi-Wan to invoke the Code regarding attachment to support his argument. Force forbid he should admit that he simply wanted Anakin all to himself! Anakin smiled coyly. “Don’t worry, Master, I won’t attach myself to anyone but you. No need to get jealous.” And no need to tell Obi-Wan that he was already looking forward to his next rendezvous with Palpatine.
“I’m not jealous, Padawan!”
But Obi-Wan’s fierce blush was enough to convince Anakin otherwise. “I think you regret not doing more than kissing me that one day,” he mused, unable to resist teasing his Master when he was already so obviously flustered.
“I’m n-not – you shouldn’t –“ An exasperated sigh. “Anakin, we agreed to never discuss that again.”
“Which is why I had to go elsewhere to get laid.”
“Anakin!”
“I’m sorry, Master, but it’s true,” Anakin said, pushing out his lower lip slightly in a sexy pout (a maneuver that had been known to charm Obi-Wan in the past). “The Chancellor’s a nice man but he’s… you know. Old. Not hot like you.”
Obi-Wan groaned and rolled his eyes. “Right. Good night, Anakin, we’ll discuss this further tomorrow. Don’t think I’m letting you sleep in, either.”
Anakin slid beneath the covers and waggled his eyebrows at Obi-Wan. “Aren’t you going to kiss me good night, Master?”
“Good night, Padawan.” Obi-Wan shot him a stern look as he left the room, but Anakin detected a smile struggling to break through his all-business demeanor.
The Padawan grinned to himself as he settled into his sheets. He imagined his Master slinking off to bed all hot’n’bothered, worked up as only Anakin could get him.
Mmmm, was that ever an arousing thought.
Anakin decided he may as well forego sleep that night. He crept silently down the hall to Obi-Wan’s bedroom, emboldened by his earlier activities and the other man’s reactions to them.
His Master had left the door open.
Fandom: Star Wars
Characters: Anakin & Obi-Wan (implied Anakin/Obi-Wan & Anakin/Palpatine)
Prompt:
sakurafromjapan's request, in which she cheated and included a plot summary ;) I'm also going to apply it to my fanfic50 claim, for #21 - Stutter.Word Count: 948
Rating: PG-13. I think. Possibly a light R.
Summary: Anakin comes back from an encounter with Palpatine and Obi-Wan gets JEALOUS.
Author's Notes: Hiatus drabble #5. And it's way too long to be considered a drabble, whoops! Sorry it's not NC-17. I seem to have a hard time achieving that rating :|
Anakin Skywalker probably should have showered before he left the Chancellor’s apartments, but the idea didn’t even occur to him – so heady was he after all the man had done to his body. It was a small miracle he’d managed to return to the Jedi Temple at all, given the lure of Palpatine’s luxurious bed. Only the knowledge that Obi-Wan would surely kill him if he wasn’t in his own bed by sunrise brought him home.
And Anakin probably should have sensed Obi-Wan’s presence in his dark bedroom, but he was distracted by his erotic memories… memories he wanted to relive on his way to sleep. He quickly shed his tunics, eager to wrap his body in remembrance instead. Suddenly the lights flicked on. Obi-Wan.
Anakin continued to undress himself, trying to look nonchalant (though his heart was racing). “What are you doing in here, Master?” he muttered crankily.
“Where have you been, Padawan?” Obi-Wan demanded. “Do you have any idea what time it is?”
Anakin sat on the bed, clad only in his underwear, and looked at his bedside chrono. “It’s nearly 0200,” he informed the older man coolly.
“Don’t get smart with me, Anakin,” Obi-Wan warned exasperatedly. “Where were you?”
“Out,” Anakin replied, yawning. He didn’t mean to be impertinent. He just really didn’t feel like getting into this now. Also, he sensed that Obi-Wan would be hurt if he knew.
“That answer is not satisfactory, Padawan.”
“I was with the Chancellor, all right?” Anakin spat out, his head bowed but his eyes seeking a reaction.
Something unreadable flickered over his Master’s face upon mention of Palpatine. “And what, pray tell, were you doing with the Chancellor at this time of night?”
“None of your business,” replied Anakin with a snort.
Obi-Wan’s usual Jedi stoicism gave way to a rare display of anger. “I’m your Master – everything you do is my business!”
“I’m not a little boy anymore, Master,” Anakin grumbled, unperturbed. “I’m a man. I can make my own decisions.”
“You are eighteen, which is barely a man by definition, and it’s my job to guide you to make the right decisions.” Obi-Wan sat beside him, some of his anger dissipating. “And I fail to see how…” A pause. “What’s that smell? You smell like…”
Oh Force, he knows. Anakin turned away.
“Like cologne… musk and sweat. Like…”
Like sex. Anakin mentally dared Obi-Wan to finish the thought. Force, his Master was such a prude. So annoying.
Obi-Wan cleared his throat. “What exactly were you two doing?” he repeated quietly.
Anakin was unbearably irritated now. He turned to glare at the irritant. “Well, if you must know, Master, YES, we were fucking! Happy now?” How Obi-Wan flinched at that! “You wanna know all the details? ‘Cause first, he sucked me off. Oh – but before that—“
“Enough!” Obi-Wan bolted off the bed and began pacing the floor, running his hand through his hair and generally looking quite discombobulated. “Anakin, I thought… I thought you were a virgin.”
The smug Padawan snickered. “I was.”
Obi-Wan gasped audibly at that, and the color drained from his face. For a moment, he looked vulnerable. The moment passed, and the calm expression of a nearly-emotionless Jedi returned.
Suddenly, Anakin felt ashamed. He remembered his earlier sense that the truth would hurt his Master – that was something he truly didn’t want to do. His tone softened. “I didn’t do anything wrong, did I? I mean, aside from sneaking out of the Temple, of course.” -But that was a rite of passage for every Padawan, and not something the Masters were overly concerned about. A minor infraction.
Obi-Wan frowned. “I worry that you’re becoming too attached to Palpatine. And remember, he is not a Jedi. He doesn’t understand our ways.”
How typical of Obi-Wan to invoke the Code regarding attachment to support his argument. Force forbid he should admit that he simply wanted Anakin all to himself! Anakin smiled coyly. “Don’t worry, Master, I won’t attach myself to anyone but you. No need to get jealous.” And no need to tell Obi-Wan that he was already looking forward to his next rendezvous with Palpatine.
“I’m not jealous, Padawan!”
But Obi-Wan’s fierce blush was enough to convince Anakin otherwise. “I think you regret not doing more than kissing me that one day,” he mused, unable to resist teasing his Master when he was already so obviously flustered.
“I’m n-not – you shouldn’t –“ An exasperated sigh. “Anakin, we agreed to never discuss that again.”
“Which is why I had to go elsewhere to get laid.”
“Anakin!”
“I’m sorry, Master, but it’s true,” Anakin said, pushing out his lower lip slightly in a sexy pout (a maneuver that had been known to charm Obi-Wan in the past). “The Chancellor’s a nice man but he’s… you know. Old. Not hot like you.”
Obi-Wan groaned and rolled his eyes. “Right. Good night, Anakin, we’ll discuss this further tomorrow. Don’t think I’m letting you sleep in, either.”
Anakin slid beneath the covers and waggled his eyebrows at Obi-Wan. “Aren’t you going to kiss me good night, Master?”
“Good night, Padawan.” Obi-Wan shot him a stern look as he left the room, but Anakin detected a smile struggling to break through his all-business demeanor.
The Padawan grinned to himself as he settled into his sheets. He imagined his Master slinking off to bed all hot’n’bothered, worked up as only Anakin could get him.
Mmmm, was that ever an arousing thought.
Anakin decided he may as well forego sleep that night. He crept silently down the hall to Obi-Wan’s bedroom, emboldened by his earlier activities and the other man’s reactions to them.
His Master had left the door open.
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Date: 2009-07-29 08:08 pm (UTC)You do realize, don't you, that you NOW have to take MY sequel request and write what happens after Anakin walks through the door Obi-Wan left conveniently open and into Obi-Wan's bed!
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Date: 2009-07-29 08:16 pm (UTC)I do? Says who??? I think it's best left to your imagination (unless you want to actually WRITE it) - if it were up to me, Obi would change his mind and shoo Ani away, then Ani would scamper off to see Palpy again <3
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Date: 2009-07-29 10:37 pm (UTC)Battleships. :D
Nice to see you admitting that Obi is hot.
(And you do have to to if gizzi puts in an official request because that's the rules).
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Date: 2009-07-29 10:44 pm (UTC)(Yes, but she has not requested anything on the official request post yet. I have 3 drabbles left to post - 1 of which I haven't written yet - and then the post is CLOSED! Bwahaha! I think she's TOO GOOD A FRIEND to make me write something so GROSS. *guilt trips her if she's reading this*)
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Date: 2009-07-30 03:03 am (UTC)Oh, btw, official request posted.
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Date: 2009-07-30 03:04 am (UTC)Which is why my "official" request will be honored, right????
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Date: 2009-07-30 03:18 am (UTC)I was hoping you'd forget!
...at least you included Palpatine :D
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Date: 2009-07-30 01:36 am (UTC)discombobulated, yayz for loong words that spell doom for Obi!
"The Padawan grinned to himself as he settled into his sheets. He imagined his Master slinking off to bed all hot’n’bothered, worked up as only Anakin could get him." - is it wrong of me as a devout Palpakin shipper to get excited about this paragraph? Anakin is such a player!
“The Chancellor’s a nice man but he’s… you know. Old. Not hot like you.” ;*_* *cries and runs away to comfort Palpy*
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Date: 2009-07-30 03:21 am (UTC)"Discombobulated" was "agitated" at first -- the d word was more fun so I changed it :)
Anakin is totally a slut in this fic. Two guys in one night? The night he lost his virginity, even! For shame!
The "not hot" thing PAINED me to write, I assure you! I'M SURE IT'S NOT TRUE. Anakin wuvs his Palpykins and thinks he's SMOKIN'.
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Date: 2009-07-30 03:27 am (UTC)You should write what happens when Palps catches Obi's wholemeal scent on Ani! ^_^ Then we'd have
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Date: 2009-07-30 03:33 am (UTC)Sssshhhh don't tell the A/O people.Heeee! Fireworks directed at whom, Obi or Ani? Maybe it depends on if Palps has staked his claim yet :D
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Date: 2009-07-30 03:48 am (UTC)I think they heard you!Oh, I think Palpy would demonstrate, conclusively, to Anakin that all the best things come "not from a Jedi". And then give him a guilt trip about Obi when Anakin's right on the verge... ^_^
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Date: 2009-07-30 04:12 am (UTC)I had to use this account for iconage - though I was torn between this one and my Palps "ZAP!" one!
Oh, and if you're friending
P.S. The fic is in her "links" list on her LJ, I believe! It's "The Lover's Wine."
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Date: 2009-07-30 04:17 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-30 04:19 am (UTC)SSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHH she doesn't need to hear that!!! It SO needs a sequel! She had an idea, she just fails at WRITING the darn thing and needs nagging!
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Date: 2009-07-30 04:21 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-30 04:23 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-30 04:22 am (UTC)Thanks for the kind words on "The Lover's Wine" Or "Whine" as Wendy normally calls it!
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Date: 2009-07-30 04:24 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-30 04:26 am (UTC)It has nothing to do with my sentiment on comments equaling love. No, nothing at all!She has natural Palpakin skillz!no subject
Date: 2009-07-30 04:32 am (UTC)Natural Palpakin skillz indeed!
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Date: 2009-07-30 04:40 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-30 04:52 am (UTC)BUT - read this. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3400637/1/Alexis
God knows, hardly anyone else has.
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Date: 2009-07-30 12:57 pm (UTC)And I now have that fic bookmarked! Yay!
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Date: 2009-07-30 04:20 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-30 04:22 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-30 04:18 am (UTC)Like me, Anakin is unfamiliar with the concept of a guilt trip!
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Date: 2009-07-30 04:21 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-30 09:30 am (UTC)It's...around 7 at night over here in Japan. Almost Dinner Time ! So...I'm going to read this one as soon as I finish my dinner, Iii(okay) ? :)
Oh...it's always NICE to have something to look forward to, isn't it !? X)
Jah-neh(See you later), then ! ;)
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Date: 2009-07-30 12:58 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-07-30 12:45 pm (UTC)Then you've got no excuse for not reading your friends' fics. :p
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Date: 2009-07-30 12:58 pm (UTC)LOL. I MIGHT have to read something of yours if it would make you that happy :)
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Date: 2009-07-30 02:35 pm (UTC)It's... P-E-R-F-E-C-T, you know, Wendy !! *smiles broadly* Oh... *blinks, eyes brimmed with tears* Arigatoh SO MUCH for writing this wonderful piece !! It just made me gasp and blush and smirk and grin, and... it was, oh, SO very-well-written, for a minute there, it almost made me forget you're allergic(?) to anything that's A/O. *hugs!*
So... *giggles* it was Anakin who got laid when he was with Chancellor ? Is that it ? ( Mmmm, I've always thought the older man IS the one who's usually on top and Anakin is the one to get fu*ked, though. ^_^; )
Um...you said at the beginning the fic is "R-rated" but...all the juicy details Anakin's given to Obi-Wan just had me all worked up and made the rating hit "NC-17" in my head ! *cackles*
And...your Obi-Wan is SO very stoic and raises his voice only when he's over jealous, it makes the whole story "believable" which just made it all the more interesting to read ! :D
Arigatoh for this mouth-watering slash fic, Wendy ! Have a NICE weekend !
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Date: 2009-07-30 02:56 pm (UTC)Yes, I'm allergic -- that's a good way to describe it! I have to give myself an allergy shot to get through it :)
Your enjoyment of the fic makes it worth it, though <3333
it was Anakin who got laid when he was with Chancellor ?
Yes definitely, at least in this case. Though I didn't give much thought to what they did before the story began. LOL shame on me, Palpakin shipper that I am!
And I'm happy you're not disappointed with the rating. YES all the NC-17 stuff can happen in your head, that way I don't have to read icky A/O pr0n! Hehehe!
Obi-Wan IS rather fun to play with when he's jealous. And when he's dealing with bratty!Anakin. ♥
Thank you so much - you have a great weekend yourself!
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Date: 2009-08-21 10:42 am (UTC):)
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Date: 2009-08-21 12:30 pm (UTC)I loooooooove teen!Ani. He's so much fun to write. Even with Obi-Wan!